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End of Year News (December 2017)

Thu Dec 28, 2017 3:57 am by Adrian

(It's been one year since I made a news thread, oops)

Merry Christmas/Festivus/whatever holiday you do or do not celebrate!

2017 was a pretty busy year IRL for most of us - according to forum statistics, our busiest month was in June with 1671 total posts, meaning our post rate has been a little …

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Post by Sal on Tue Jun 17, 2014 9:21 pm

After having some weird urge to try writing a horror story for the first time, and after finishing the amazing and well done RPG Whodunnit, I've decided to make this fanfic based off the RPG. I changed a lot of things but some things you will notice are the same. I hope you enjoy it and also on a small note, I added in the YouTube videos as background music to listen to as you read through my story. Feel free to listen to them or not. ^^ Also, if you have some eerie and/or creepy OST (Original Sound Track) music you want to hear be put in the story at some point feel free to PM me or message me on my skype. (:
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Warning: There is some swearing in this story.

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My green orbs couldn’t help but stare immensely at the large manor in front of me. It was crazy enough looking at it, but knowing I would be staying here for two weeks on vacation was even crazier. A beautiful beach, swimming pool and hot tub, library, stables, forest to hike in, those were just the beginning of the large list of things this place had to offer to us.

Yes, us.

Instead of allowing myself to hog all of this to myself I would have to share with twelve other teenagers who were luckily chosen to be a part of this “vacation of a lifetime” as the company hosting this, and even I, liked to call it. Yet, knowing I’d be staying with a bunch of wild, hormonal, and overall just flat out annoying teens for the whole time just made this trip… slightly worse.

“Ugh! This place is just, like, not even that big!” One of the females next to me complained.

See what I mean?

With an eye roll, I stroll along with the other teens down the clean, cobblestone pathway. The large oak doors opening almost on cue when the first male in the front appeared before them. While the others were busy just trying to rush through the doors I instead was in the back to observe the breath taking architecture of the manor itself. Smooth, grey bricks were neatly placed together, complimenting the white windows that were orderly placed around the house. Even the white marble columns showed hours of careful craftsmanship.

“Evening milady.” A butler dressed in typical attire and a thick British accent greeted me. I simply nodded to him and joined the clump of inpatient vacationers.

“Excuse me, Excuse me,” The butler called again, this time standing on the grand staircase that led to the second floor of the manor as he waited for the murmurs to die out, “Standish, is the name. I will be your assistant for these next two weeks of bliss. Any questions or comments you have will be answered now, so please feel free to ask anything that comes to mind.”

Instantly, the whiny girl from before raised her hand and spoke, “Um, we get our own rooms right? ‘Cause I totally did not sign up to room with anyone else.” She scoffed.

I felt myself inhale loudly instinctively. I instantly knew this girl was going to be a pain in the ass for not only me, but everyone else, for the next two weeks.

“Each one of you have designated rooms; we prefer if you do not “buddy” up and that any couples please stay in their assigned rooms for the night.” I noticed a male and female shifted awkwardly to my left, they were holding hands.

At least I would be able to possibly get away from everyone at night.

“Any other questions?”

“Yes! Yes! I do!” Another girl called out in a squeaky pitch, dramatically waving her arm back and forth to get his attention despite Standish being right in front of her, “When is dinner?”

“Dinner will not be served tonight but breakfast will take place tomorrow at 9:30 a.m., in place of dinner we have set a small snack aside for you on the table located in your rooms,” His eyes trailed off distantly behind us before he added, “since the sun is setting and I assume you are all very worn from your long voyage—we shall take the tour tomorrow after your first meal. Please meet down here by 9:15 so I can escort you to the dining room.”

A few male teens to the right complained about not getting the five-star meals until the morning while rest of us just yawned in reply and began our struggle up the large stairs. Mumbling more nonsense.

Finally after a few people were assigned their rooms I had been showed to mine. When I entered I was impressed with the layout, a king size bed with a trunk in the front of it, side table, dresser, mirror, large bathroom, couch, and flat screen TV. Each piece of furniture seemed expensive and as if it they hadn’t been touched before. That was just how neat this room was.
Without any care and dying from the lack of sleep I had gotten on the boat I allowed myself to fall onto the bed. I didn’t even bother undressing into my nightwear or brush my teeth or even set the alarm for the morning. I simply just passed out.




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I woke to a spine tingling static from the TV across the room. My heart danced in my chest and my head began to pound from sitting up too fast. Woozily, I stood on my own two feet and forced them to move over to where the remote sat untouched on the coffee table.
Just as I began to reach for the device, the screen flickered to a gray background with a dark silhouette. I couldn’t tell who the person was or if it was a male or female. It was just a black blob with an ever changing voice.

"Hello. My identity is not very important. You all have been gathered here on the vacation of a lifetime. I, however, am here for completely different reason.

Someone among you is not who they say they are. They are an experienced killer, and have been planning to hijack this vacation for quite a long time now as a form of extreme protest against the corporation that sent you all here, unknowing of the consequences. Escape is futile - and not recommended. There's a bracelet on your wrist, the one with the blinking light. If you step outside the invisible fence around the island, it will go off - taking it off results in the same punishment.

My advice to you: don't make too many enemies. You just might make the wrong one.

I will deliver a message to each and every one of you at dinner. Until then, farewell.

P.S. If you don't believe me, just go to the bottom of the grand staircase. That's all the proof you need, right there."


I stopped breathing almost entirely once the message flickered off. My eyes instantly glanced to my wrist where a weird band with a blinking light tightly squeezed itself onto me. This wasn’t true, was it? It had to be a sick joke played by the corporation itself—no wonder it was free.

With a timid laugh to myself as I tried to raise my ever dropping spirits, everything just stopped completely when one of the girls screamed as loud as humanly possible. So loud it continued to ring in my ears even from being protected by a door.

Gingerly, I forced my trembling hands to turn the knob and squint down the hallway. One of the guys from yesterday looked at me before taking off down the hall like a mad-man. Obviously something was going on.

Not bothering to close the door behind me, I broke out into a sprint after the boy, almost running into him when he stopped at top of the steps and glared down at… something.
“Oh my god.” He muttered under his shaky breath, I peered behind him to get a look at what the big deal was about—

Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my god.

There, at the bottom of the steps was our assistant, Standish. His body was turned and deformed in an unnatural position as he laid on the once white marble flooring that was stained with red. Not red paint, not red juice, but red, crimson blood.

I felt my eyes water up from the sight but I couldn’t turn away from the monstrosity. The innocent butler who was just speaking what seemed like a few minutes ago was now lying on the floor in a crumpled, bloody mess. His eyes still open with heartbreaking fear you could almost feel. In the middle of his head was the words written in his blood—

“DIE”

And, if you looked to where the D opened up in the middle you could tell there was a clean bullet hole.

Someone had shot him sometime last night. Yet, no one seemed to remember hearing a gun go off; even the light sleepers hadn’t heard a single thing.

“What the hell is this bull shit?! Is this some twisted joke that’s supposed to freaking funny? Cause I’m sure not laughing!” Another one of the boys started shouting while another ran back up the stairs behind me and gagged. Some of the girls began crying and breaking down into tears, muttering and shouting words of nonsense and remorse.

I, personally, couldn’t even think straight. What was going on? Was this really what we thought it was? Was this being recorded on some crappy reality TV show? Was Standish really… dead?

“Roll call, who the hell is everyone right now.” One of the girls snap and break my confusion for just a slight moment.

First was Riley Fick, an eighteen year old who seemed to be living a normal life up until now, next was Melanie Gray, the bitch who wouldn’t stop complaining, the twins Niles and Miles Thorton who had a similar mischievous look in their eyes but spoke with shaky tones, Patty Stewart who was the youngest of us all at fourteen years of age, Noah Bristol, the one who almost had thrown up behind me, Carmen Cass who we mistakenly mistook as Carmen Ass at first, the couple who I had noticed yesterday was Raymond Kendrick and Eleanor Ralston, Marissa Banter was the girl who asked about dinner yesterday and was no longer very excited for it, there was also Hunter Williams who seemed very timid, Marcus Ashworth who looked like big tough guy on the outside but baby on the inside from the sound of his voice, and then me. Rin Atara.

All we could do is stare at one another in an eerie silence that made the hairs on the back of my neck stand.

One of us was a killer.


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Post by Bat on Tue Jun 17, 2014 9:34 pm

So is Marcus like Tyrus?

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Post by Sal on Tue Jun 17, 2014 9:37 pm

xD I didn't intentionally make any connections to people besides Rin and Melanie as Liam. 

But, sure! Marcus is like Tyrus! :3

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Post by Bat on Tue Jun 17, 2014 9:38 pm

I assumed you made name changes but kept the personality of the original characters.

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Post by Sal on Tue Jun 17, 2014 9:43 pm

It actually kinda ended up like that, but I honestly didn't mean to make references like I did. ^^

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Post by Adrian on Tue Jun 17, 2014 9:59 pm

Very nice! Keep going!

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Post by Sal on Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:10 pm

Thank you Adrian, will do! (:

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Post by WritingBookworm on Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:14 pm

Well done! I can't wait until the next chapter. Very Happy

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Post by NightOwl on Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:53 pm

That was amazing Lyssy!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! :]

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Post by Paradox on Tue Jun 17, 2014 11:26 pm

That's was great!

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