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Well shit, i'm a ghost.

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Well shit, i'm a ghost.

Post by Fix-It on Thu Aug 06, 2015 1:52 am

Before I post this I have a few things to say:

1. I wrote this on my goddamn phone, errors are to be expected because I have barely edited it-- knowing that if I try it'll probably delete itself or something lol. So no, this isn't professionally written or anything.
2. This is my imagination! This never happened/will happen. I just got bored.
3. I didn't know what to call it, sorry.

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Florence was cradled by clouds above N'al Ren, watching everything and everyone from above. She felt the sensation of being weightless; the moment Joshua punctured her chest she began to float.

She glided, like an angel without wings-- soaring amongst the clouds and waiting. Waiting for someone to say something, for something to happen.

Her absence was briefly noted by the Row, before duties called and they moved along swiftly erasing all traces of her life with one fell swipe.

She didn't mind too much-- she had seen it coming from miles away and quite frankly she didn't want a huge gathering to mourn her loss.

Although maybe a few tears would have been warming to the heart.

Florence heaved a ghastly sigh and rolled onto her chest, cupping her face with her palms and observing Runite's Row.

She flipped through several people before landing on Melana-- Melana Fray and stopped for a moment. It took a moment, but Florence eventually realized something was wrong. It had appeared that Melana had left in a fit of jealousy and rage.

Florence frowned and sat for a moment processing the newly gained information. She pulled a few dry strands of hair behind her ear and made a decision.

She lightly dropped from the clouds, her ribbon decorated hair cascading behind her as she landed upon the sidewalk next to Melana. She knew there was nothing to be done-- however she could pretend that she was alive and well and with Melana.

Although she could not see her, Florence walked beside the girl-- listening to her mumbling and footsteps.

Florence projected a small grin on her face, and held Melana's hand in her's in an attempt to reassure her.

"It'll be ok." Her faint voice whispered, blending in with the rough winds as a small shiver was sent down her spine.

She walked with Melana for what seemed like forever, she sat down with her, and she somehow prevented herself from crying. She felt warm tears build up in her eyes, but whenever they drew near-- she just batted her eyes to prevent them from showing. She didn't mind how she would appear when crying, it was just the idea of being weak when she isn't even alive.

She knew that she could never talk to Melana and get a reply again, and was fully aware that she would never experience another hug from the girl.

"Hey Melana," Florence whimpered,

"I'm sorry." That was the only thing Florence could muster up the courage to say-- as they sat together on a small bench. The sun rippled into the water from behind the tall buildings, casting a bit of light on Florence's mystical figure. Blue veins swelled through her wax paper skin, as she lightly floated above the metal.

Her chest was blotched dark red, her face almost frozen, her toes curled and wrinkled. She was wearing a simple white sundress without shoes. A look she would have never worn when she was alive, but it made her feel more light and free to be who she was now.

She could hear whispers clouding in her ears, and began to feel like she was withering away all over again. A small frown replaced her usual grin as she stiffened her back.

"I've got to go." She said to herself.

Florence wiped a single clear tear that she promised not to make, from her transparent skin, before planting her lips on Melana's cheek. She giggled, before looking back up towards the clouds.

"I love you." The whispers began to grow, clouding her vision with pure white. She nodded to herself, as if she was saying that she was leaving so the whispers would dissipate.

Florence effortlessly floated back up above the clouds, tilting her head down as her vision was fixed and smiling at the girl with goggles on her head.

"Goodbye Melana."

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Yeah idk sorry
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Post by Hime on Thu Aug 06, 2015 1:57 am

HOLY CRAP!! Fix-It, this is incredibly beautiful and tragic. I could see it all happening and I felt a really strong connection while reading it. Very well done, I love it. Smile
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Post by Fix-It on Thu Aug 06, 2015 2:10 am

~Hermione~ wrote:HOLY CRAP!! Fix-It, this is incredibly beautiful and tragic. I could see it all happening and I felt a really strong connection while reading it. Very well done, I love it. Smile

thank you so much uwu ❤️
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Re: Well shit, i'm a ghost.

Post by Salphirix on Thu Aug 06, 2015 2:15 am

When you feel sad because you really liked this and it stabbed you in the feels ;-;

Meep. ;`; I loved it.
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Re: Well shit, i'm a ghost.

Post by Athena Lionheart on Thu Aug 06, 2015 9:11 am

Awwww Syd ;~; you did a great job for being on your phone. Seriously, the emotions communicated in this are amazing. I'm crying impressed!
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Re: Well shit, i'm a ghost.

Post by WritingBookworm on Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:43 pm

Awww, this is so sad D: It's very lovely, and it goes deep into Florence's character as well as the relationship between her and Melana. The prose in this piece makes you cry is beautiful. Well done!
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