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End of Year News (December 2017)

Thu Dec 28, 2017 3:57 am by Adrian

(It's been one year since I made a news thread, oops)

Merry Christmas/Festivus/whatever holiday you do or do not celebrate!

2017 was a pretty busy year IRL for most of us - according to forum statistics, our busiest month was in June with 1671 total posts, meaning our post rate has been a little …

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Post by Wishie on Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:00 pm

This man - he was completely alone in the world. Nobody sat with him. Nobody offered him company, a sympathetic ear. Though he was surrounded by people, none of them paid him a second look. None of them even granted him that first crucial look, the look that grants kinship, kind. He was alone, treated as less than human simply for something he had no ability to control.

Many of the people passing by - they never even stopped to read his sign. Though they gave money to him, passing by, coins are cold and hard, little circles of artificial sympathy. He had to reach for those little discs of artificial caring, the ones carelessly thrown onto the cardboard he sat on. Blindly groping for the small coins that would never feed him for more than a day, much less last him longer than a few hours at best. A crucial fact that they - the well-fed citizens of the city - ignored.

He sat on the sidewalk, vulnerable as one can get. Sitting in a dark world of his own creation, envisioning the sights that he can’t see by using the sounds he can hear. A blind man, spurned by society because of the perfect little box that he cannot fit into. Not seeing, but hearing the coins clatter into his cup. Not knowing how he will feed himself, day in and day out, when he cannot even count the money that strangers are giving him.
He cannot continue to live like this. Not when he is ignored by those who would throw him those pennies, in tiny amounts that will barely last him an hour at most. Not when he is alone, in the darkness, reaching out for those who would simply shake him off. Not when he is vulnerable, to thieves that would steal from those even less fortunate than themselves, steal from those who cannot even see it coming.

(It's short but I had half an hour to write it. Comment below with anything you might want to say, constructive criticism helps a lot)

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Post by King Ki11 on Fri Sep 12, 2014 7:13 am

Strange way to end it, but it was good.

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Post by boyhoy on Fri Sep 12, 2014 8:21 am

That was really good. I loved how it progressed, with us finding out more and more about this man as you went along. It had a nice flow to it as well. Nice job Very Happy. I hope you upload some more in the future because I'm definitely interested in what else you have!

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Post by Sal on Fri Sep 12, 2014 8:31 am

I liked the words you used ^^ keep it up it's really good for being short!

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Post by Paradox on Fri Sep 12, 2014 5:37 pm

I like it!

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Post by Ace on Fri Sep 12, 2014 7:56 pm

This was really sad, but good; provoking emotion takes talent. ^^

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Re: Three Words (Unedited)

Post by ~Dylan Battle~ on Sat Sep 13, 2014 12:06 pm

That was a really good short. You're gift for description and writing is magnificent, I hope you post more of your work soon.

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