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Post by Bat on Tue Apr 01, 2014 8:54 am

How about this revision? Btw the pics for tech will be there


Neo City
New Neo City:

-Fireshot Mechanics:
-Plaza
-Downtown
-Park with a playground and a basketball court



Inopia

Inopia:

-Square
-Forest with a village
-Junkyard
-Apartments



Desolo(poorer section of Inopia):
Desolo:


Fireshot's Products
"XSS-1"
"ExtremeGear"
"Air Pit"

Name: XSS-1 or ExoSkeleton Suit Level 1
Functions: It is an exoskeleton suit or cyber suit that gives the user the ability to manipulate elements. The suit release substances form the elements. How do they keep it in place? There is a function called "Gravity Controller". It is grants the user the ability to use gravity in order to manipulate the elements.

Appearance: It is a very thin stick figure like suit that you can wear under your clothes and people will barely notice you have it. It is worn on front of your body. It has two big circular holes that are attached to your palms in order to release the elements. On both sides of each of these big holes are smaller holes that activate the gravity controller.
Strengths: It is very durable and not easy to break.
Weaknesses: The gravity controller has limited distance on what to control. Its distance is 35 radius. Also, if it breaks, it is very complicated for an average technician to fix it.
Other: It is customizable to any way you like it.


Name: ExtremeGear(EG)
Functions: They are a form of vehicles that allows you to go at a very high speed and acceleration. It uses air as a source of fuel in order to float and go at great speed.
Appearance:



There are different types: Board(first row 1# and 3#), Skates(1st row 2# and 4th row 1#), Bike(3rd row 1# and 3#), Air Ride(2nd row 1# and 3#), Bike(3rd row 1# and 3#), Yacht(2nd row 2# and 4th row 2#) and Wheel(3rd row 2# and 4th row 3#)
There is a setting called “Off Mode” - that is when you aren’t using your gear (except for skates). It will be minimized into this:

Strengths: It is great at making sharp cuts, going at high speed and it causes you to make turbulences that can slow an enemy down
Weaknesses: Since EG uses air as fuel, it will eventually runs out and the vehicle automatically stops. You can refuel it by using the Air Pit that is plentiful all over the Neo City, but very few in the rural place. This is the fastest way to refuel.  Otherwise another method, which is very slow process, is to set the gear to minimized mode to refuel.
Other: You can add any design you like on it and customize it. There is a link below that can help you pick what EG you would like to have, but it is your choice to describe it or pick one from the link.

Different designs of Extreme Gear*:
http://sonic.wikia.com/wiki/Extreme_Gear#Lists_of_Extreme_Gears
*Omnitempus is the only one that isn’t allowed. Any other type of gear is fine.



Name: Air Pit
Functions: It replenishes the fuel, which is Air, for Extreme Gears
Appearance:

Strengths: It only fuels air
Weaknesses: can be destroyed but with great force
Other: N/A

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Post by Salphirix on Tue Apr 01, 2014 2:28 pm

That looks a lot better! It's simple, sweet, and to the point but still allows a description of what they are without confusion. ^^

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Post by Bat on Tue Apr 01, 2014 3:39 pm

Well, I had pics for them, but wont people get confused again bcz it may be too much?

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Post by Salphirix on Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:11 pm

Well, as it was now was just fine. But if there's more pics to be added then just make sure it's not too many. xD

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Post by Bat on Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:32 pm

How about I have an album and say "if you want to see what they look like, go look here. If you arent feeling it, then proceed to read"

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Post by Salphirix on Wed Apr 02, 2014 5:42 am

That sounds fine. ^^

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Post by Bat on Wed Apr 02, 2014 7:04 am

So is there anything else to be fixed? I think that is it

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Post by Salphirix on Wed Apr 02, 2014 1:31 pm

I don't believe so. But question, is there a plot behind your RP or is it just a roam around and go with the flow kind of one?

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Post by Bat on Wed Apr 02, 2014 5:22 pm

There is. But Writing told me that my plot shouldnt be set like I should let it go with the flow. I planned a revolution to happen later on but she said if the storyline isnt going to that direction, I should leave it as is

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Post by Salphirix on Wed Apr 02, 2014 5:25 pm

Alright, I just wanted to know. ^-^ Not that you had to put it in there.

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